Kia ora Jack, My name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms. You have done a fantastic job creating this blog post about ‘Are you in the right place at the right time online?’. I really like how you have included examples of websites where you are in the correct place when using them, and appreciate how you included images to accompany each slide. I did notice, however, that the majority of the images you have included are blurry. It would be great if you could edit this blogpost and replace the blurry images with clear pictures. It would also be great if when you edit this post, you could include a short explanation about each website. This will help your viewers understand this post more, and give them a better understanding as to what each website is about. Out of all of the websites you have included, which one is your favourite and why? I see you have included a site called ‘Matific’ on your slideshow. What exactly is this website, and what activities are involved? Keep up the great work! Nga mihi
You are good at posting things and really good at spelling and you are on the right place at the right time😎🐈
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jack,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kieryn and I will be working with Kaniere School to comment on your blog posts over the next two terms.
You have done a fantastic job creating this blog post about ‘Are you in the right place at the right time online?’. I really like how you have included examples of websites where you are in the correct place when using them, and appreciate how you included images to accompany each slide.
I did notice, however, that the majority of the images you have included are blurry. It would be great if you could edit this blogpost and replace the blurry images with clear pictures.
It would also be great if when you edit this post, you could include a short explanation about each website. This will help your viewers understand this post more, and give them a better understanding as to what each website is about.
Out of all of the websites you have included, which one is your favourite and why?
I see you have included a site called ‘Matific’ on your slideshow. What exactly is this website, and what activities are involved?
Keep up the great work!
Nga mihi